Doyle,+Erin

Round #1 Judge: Raymond Zhang


 * you should make sure your cards are in the right order. Also read a CP, I believe you have one ||  ||
 * You should of just been prepping for the 1NR that way you don’t have to use prep. ||  ||
 * There is no need to double cover in the 1Nr, you should focus on the case arguments your partner assigned ||



Erin—good organization—you did a nice job of keeping your cards in an order that made it easier to flow. Your 2ac should also include extensions of the 1ac and analytics—blocks would be helpful. Topicality needs more than a counter-interpretation. 2ar—you should start with T, then go to case. Extend arguments from earlier speeches more explicitly.