Dandgaval,+Arya

ease into 1AC, you start too fast and it's hard to catch the first few words you say. good cross ex questions and answers follow your road map in the 1AR, you skipped around a little you dropped energy poverty in the 1AR! Make sure you allocate your time as best as possible to make sure you can go on every flow. I like your style and ethos in round, great job!
 * Round 3- Ruby**


 * 6/27**

Try to stabilize your speed ethe 1AC - you go fast on the card and then go way slow on tags and the plan text - go somewhere in the middle for the whole speech to make it easier to flow.

AFF: be more aware of 2AC cards Maddie: Go a little faster, do more speaking drills. 1Ar a bit messy, extend impacts. Pay attention in the 2AC Ella: 2AC had good coverage, need to extend cards and flesh them out more. Try or die args should be made Flesh out Zeller more and why warming is the most important impact. In crossex bring in impacts, point out analytics as lacking warrants, extend dropped advantages and frame them as conceded, kick pov, compare ev Jordan: more clash, it’s more persuasive, 1NR should have been T too Arya: Keep revising blocks, add DA turns If a bottleneck occurs means that we don’t get credit for the aff, and explain why it turns poverty—the mining in china is similar to the impact that Gilligan references. 2NR was fine, don’t need to give such a basic o/v. story should come together through clash and drops. Organization would be a better if it was framed as DA turns case explicitly. Extend ev by name. Raises standard. Should have run Nuke DA and T for time skew
 * Round 6- Maddie/Ella vs Jordan/Arya**
 * Judge: Ozzy**