Phillips,+Rylee

__**Round 1: 1NC**__

- try to improve your ethos by looking up at the judge more and have variations with your tone and speed - never start your first question in CX with what you did wrong - be clear telling the judge where you want them to flow your overview (just say new sheet) - always remember to address when you are kicking things out of the round


 * make sure you communicate with your partner about how to split the block, dont try to go for too much in your 1NR when you dont have enough time

Good 1AC delivery! However, do not summarize the 1AC at the end of your speech. The 1AR was smart, however you should work on word efficiency.
 * 6/26**

6/29

very strong cross-ex, good form and confidence. bring some of that clarity to your speeches and you'll be golden, but you do a good job sign posting and differentiating between tags and evidence.

good catching their undercoverage on the REM. i like the analytics in the block, and the line by line strengthens your position coming out of the block. the 1nr was a lot weaker than the 2nc, which was disappointing. just take some prep, it's cool, you're a maverick. it just seemed a little more disjointed and disorganized. still not BAD or like debate-wrecking, just a noticable difference. the argument that we should just party it up and die instead of saving ourselves doesn't really do much for you